英語4級作文評分標準

　　全國大學英語四、六級考試作文題評分原則及標準

　　一、評分原則

　　1. CET檢查考生是否達到大學英語教學大綱規定的四級和六級教學要求，對作文的評判應以此要求為準則。

　　2.CET作文題采用總體評分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(Award Scores)，而不是按語言點的錯誤數目扣分。

　　3.從內容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。內容和語言是一個統一體。作文應表達題目所規定的內容，而內容要通過語言來表達。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而合適地表達思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。

　　4.避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分給低分，包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應只給中間的幾種分數。

　　5.所發樣卷一律不得翻印，嚴禁出版，一經發現，必予追究。

　　二、評分標準

　　1.本題滿分為15分

　　2.閱卷標準共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標準樣卷一份。

　　3.閱卷人員根據閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數(如 8分)相似，即定為 該分數(即8分)；若認為稍優或稍劣于該分數則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。

　　4.評分標準

　　2分 — 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數為嚴重錯誤。

　　5分 — 基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。

　　8分 — 基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。

　　11分— 切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。

　　14分— 切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。

　　[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想，則給0分。]

　　5.字數不足應酌情扣分：

　　累計字數 CET-4 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 <49

　　CET-6 140-149 130-139 120-129 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 <79

　　扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9

　　[注：1.如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結束句，均不得計入所寫字數。

　　2.規定的內容未寫全者，按比例扣分。

　　3.如果扣為0分，要慎重處理。]

　　Direcctions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

　　假設你在某日某時某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。見證書須包括以下

　　幾點：

　　1.車禍發生的時間及地點

　　2.你所見到的車禍情況

　　3.你對車禍原因的分析

　　以下為各得分檔次英語作文范文,全面體現了評分標準的區別

　　An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident

　　14 points

　　It was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didn’t wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked.

　　I think the boy’s absent-mindedness accounted much for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause was the unproperly parked truck, which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to this accident.

　　11 points

　　It was last Friday morning. The accident happened when I was on my way to school. It was so terrible that I would never forget it.

　　I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, with a big sound, the accident happened. The red car stoped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldn’t respond immiditely. The back of the red car was badly damaged, but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident.

　　I think the main reasons are as follows: First of all, the red car shouldn’t stop suddenly without any signals. Secondly, the following car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measurs when any badly situation. Finally, these two drivers were careless. If they had paid more attention to driving, this accident wouldn’t have happened.

　　8 points

　　The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 o’clock.

　　The yellow car involed in the accident was running at a high speed along the right-hand when it happened. Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.

　　I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly made the accidents happen. It was not too careful for them when running a car. Secondly, the weather also should be responsible for it. The fog made the vision of drivers vague. Last but not the least, the constructure of the roads was unreasonable. The trafic lights are needed at any junctions.

　　5 points

　　It was 8:00 this morning, I went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrible traffic accident happend.

　　A student ride his bike in a high speed, and just when he arrived the school gate, a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground. Surely, the poor boy was hurt very bad.

　　I think there are two reasons for the accident. First, it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late, he ride his bike so fast, even didn’t low down his speed at the gate. Secend, the truck is too large, and at that time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so the bike driver have no other way to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road.

　　2 points

　　I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1. Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place.

　　My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didn’t attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didn’t heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.