感激的人:謝謝你，朋友-Thank You, My Friend
謝謝你，朋友
【內(nèi)容提示】
你喜歡某門(mén)學(xué)科，比如英語(yǔ)吧。你參加了你們縣或你們市組織的該學(xué)科奧林匹克比賽，但是失敗了。你非常懊喪。正在這時(shí)，你收到一封朋友的來(lái)信，信中用“失敗是成功之母”之類的話給你鼓勁。在該同學(xué)的鼓勵(lì)和幫助下你第二次參加了比賽并獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。
【作文示范】
Thank You, My Friend
I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom①.
I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest②. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. “What a pity!” I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at me.
I love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.
Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, “Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don＇t lose confidence③. Keep on your study and you will succeed!” I knew it was from the good friend of mine.
These words encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.
I am very lucky to have such a good friend. I＇m thankful to him for his help.
�。ㄟx自《英語(yǔ)畫(huà)刊》高中版1996年第4期）
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①wisdom [＇wizd+m] n.智慧；明智
�、赾ontest [＇k&ntest] n.比賽；競(jìng)賽
③confidence [＇k&nfid+ns] n.信心；自信
【寫(xiě)法指要】
作者由失敗到成功走過(guò)一段曲折的路。有過(guò)失敗的人才知道勝利的價(jià)值。作者把自己的成功歸功于自己一位好朋友的鼓勵(lì)。所以，他對(duì)自己的朋友十分感激并寫(xiě)了此文。文章由失敗、挫折寫(xiě)到鼓勵(lì)、幫助，再到獲獎(jiǎng)，順理成章