改寫(xiě):路遇-Meeting on the Road,改寫(xiě):路遇-Meeting on the Road
改寫(xiě):路遇-Meeting on the Road
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【內(nèi)容提示】
下面是一篇記敘文，請(qǐng)把它改寫(xiě)成對(duì)話(huà)。
Meeting on the Road
Peter and John are classmates. One day, they met on their way home after school. Peter asked John what was wrong with him because John looked a little pale. John told him that he didn't feel well because he had a cold and a slight fever. Peter asked John if he had seen the doctor. John said that he had and the doctor had given him some medicine and asked him to take a rest. Peter advised John to stay in bed for some time and to take good care of himself. John thanked him and asked him to tell the teacher that he wanted to ask for a day's sick leave.
【作文示范】
Meeting on the Road
Peter: What's wrong with you? You look a little pale.
John: I don't feel very well.
Peter: I'm sorry to hear that. I hope it's nothing serious.
John: No, it's just a cold, but I'm running a slight fever.
Peter: Have you seen the doctor?
John: Yes. I've already been to the clinic. The doctor told me to take some medicine and to have a good rest.
Peter: Well, you'd better lie in bed for some time and take good care of yourself.
John: Thanks. I'll do that. By the way, would you please tell the teacher that I want to ask for a day's sick leave?
Peter: All right. I will.
John: Thank you. Bye-bye.
Peter: Bye-bye.
【寫(xiě)法指要】
在把記敘文改寫(xiě)成對(duì)話(huà)的時(shí)候，要把間接引語(yǔ)變成直接引語(yǔ)，過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)變成現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)代詞變成第二或第一人稱(chēng)代詞，正式文體變成非正式文體的縮約式如“I'm sorry”等。還可根據(jù)行文的需要增加一些套語(yǔ)，如“All right”，“Thank you”，“Bye-bye”等。
改寫(xiě):路遇-Meeting on the Road