寫回信，朋友來(lái)旅游
下面是li hua給zhang hong的信,請(qǐng)你以zhang hong的口氣按提示寫一封120詞左右的回信.
september 16
dear zhang hong,
how is everything with you i hope things are going well.
there is not much news here.i just go to work every morning and come back to my apartment every night.shanghai is crowded with people,but i don't really know any of them.i don't like the city,but my job is quite interesting,and the pay is quite good.
what are your plans for national day if you don't have anything special,i hope you can visit shanghai.come and share my apartment.it is quite large and it is near the theatres,museums and stores.
write soon,and say you can spend the holiday here.
sincerely yours
li hua
回信提示:回信應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:
⑴因故信至昨天才收到;
⑵li hua喜歡他的工作,但不喜歡上海,zhang hong談自己的看法;
⑶謝絕li hua的邀請(qǐng),并說(shuō)明原因;
⑷也向li hua發(fā)出來(lái)杭州度假的邀請(qǐng).
【參考答案】
september 25
dear li hua,
thank you for your letter dated september 16.it wasn't until yesterday that i got it,as i had been out on business for a week.
in your letter,you told me that you preferred your job to the city of shanghai.in my opinion,shanghai is an exciting and a beautiful place.try to enjoy yourself in your spare time besides your devotion to work.
i'm sorry to say that i won't go to shanghai because our school will hold an open-air party.i have to stay for the performances on the holiday.by the way,would you please come and join us in the party hangzhou is so beautiful in autumn that i'm sure you will like it.
yours
zhang hong(127)
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