《My family》修改稿
my family
my family has four people. they’re my parents, my sister and me.
my mother is a good mother. she is 39 years old. she has many things to do every day: washing clothes, cooking dinner and cleaning our room. she is tired everyday.
my father is a worker. he often works a whole day. sometimes, he does not work. he is 37 years old.
my sister and i are students. she is in class 1, grade 3 and i am in class 2, grade 7. after school, we often do our homework. then we play computer or watch tv.
i love my family!
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