成功的秘訣優秀英語四級作文
行文要點：
1、 理解寫作主題。此文拋出了一個問題給我們，那就是“成功的關鍵是什么”，那好，這就此文的主題。
2、 提筆寫作，文章第一段。首先要引出話題，之后再細細討論。
3、 文章第二段，就觀點寫作，分別闡述觀點。
4、 文章第三段，對文章進行總結。
參考例文：
The Key of Success
There are many billionaire businessmen in the world, such as Bill Gates, Warren Buffett. One the one hand they have made their fortunes through fair and legitimate means, on the other hand they enjoy closed relationships with others and are full of passion for the work in which they are engaged.
Life would become insignificant without quality personal relationships with families and friends. Every dollar we earned would be worthless if we don’t have companions with whom to share our success and failure, joys and sorrows. Besides strong relationships, genuine success requires a fulfilling vocation too. Some people are born into rich families or generate substantial wealth through lucky circumstances, such as buying a winning lottery ticket. Despite being wealthy, these individuals would not qualify as success unless they had a career or purpose in life to keep them positive and nurture their souls.
Everyone is eager to be a successful man but not everyone can do it. It requires endless passion, hard-working and excellent interpersonal relations with others to succeed.